Going through life with the lens cap off
It's very short but a rich poem.
Domo sumimasen, Miki-san! I didn't like the first version of this poem that I posted Thursday afternoon, so I rewrote it and retitled it. I like this one much better.
No jacket todayBut tomorrow much colder sparrow doesn't care
Nice one, Oxeye! ;)
I agree with you. This version is much better.
lovely poem MichaelI loved this sentence :from a treetop perch unseenSo beautiful...and how often i hve heard the bird but could not see it.
Hi Miki,Yes, I didn't like the first version at all. Thanks for your comment!As ever, Anu, thank you!
Lucky you!Here's mine:Skyscraper called homeA helicopter flies byTo keep the sea safeThat was a first!!! woo hoo!
Hey LB, that was great!!Haiku and senryu (same 5-7-5 syllable arrangement as haiku, but a poem about human nature) can be great fun!
I am gonna have to go practice those!! btw...I have a photo for you on my blog today ;)
Hey LB,I'm fixin' to visit your blog right now.
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